Don’t give up, you may want to rewrite this story and see if the comments improve.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-07 08:34:59F-ING amazing. Porn 16 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2012-03-07 23:43:04paragraphs are a must for any storyanonymous readerReport 2012-03-07 16:56:41paragraphs are a must for any storyanonymous readerReport 2011-09-21 15:39:06Your story was good and the sex was hot, but it was hardd to read. Read the story yourself and I am sure you will understand what I and others are telling you. Your writting is like someone talking without changing tones or expressions. Your writting is like someone talking without changing tones or expressions. Writting must have comas, quotations, and paragraohs. Writting must have comas, quotations, and paragraohs. Don’t give up, you may want to rewrite this story and see if the comments improve.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-07 08:34:59F-ING amazing.
