Not enough details. 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-30 11:36:27Poorly written due to the text talk such as “Omg”. Free Porn Not enough details. good story«123» Not enough details. You rushed it. and thats all it is Fantasy. and thats all it is Fantasy. good story«123» The storyline was nice but like I said not enough details.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-01 03:29:44awsome story 10/10READERReport 2007-09-28 00:14:32cool he should have cryed and begged more but very goodREADERReport 2005-09-12 00:32:29it was an “okay” story, if it was longer it would have been better and i know that this is fiction but making it a little more realistic would help. 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-30 11:36:27Poorly written due to the text talk such as “Omg”. good story«123» 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-30 11:36:27Poorly written due to the text talk such as “Omg”. good story«123» Not enough details. 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-30 11:36:27Poorly written due to the text talk such as “Omg”.
