reminds me of the sex movies on cinemax . reminds me of the sex movies on cinemax . Porn The flow and ebb is good and, unlike many of the utterly uncouth stories on this site, you strike a nice blend between fantastical raunchiness and plausible reality. i think teach’s suggestion of sprinkling in some spanish is a good one! I wish that there was more detail to bring out more of the Latina in her… Do keep writing. be descriptive. 10 comments«12»TOACHEZReport 2010-07-27 21:01:13it took too long to start the sex . I concur, however, with latino; you should do more to bring out the “latina” qualities. some tiny bit of realism would make this better .MoneReport 2009-08-21 19:07:47Very nice… be descriptive. it was a least 5 minutes . 10 comments«12»TOACHEZReport 2010-07-27 21:01:13it took too long to start the sex . it was a least 5 minutes . be descriptive. 10 comments«12»TOACHEZReport 2010-07-27 21:01:13it
