SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential. Free Porn But you need to clean it up and resubmit it. That’s just disgusting. That’s just disgusting. The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. 15 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-13 14:18:53I louved thees story, and I am reeley lougged een. 15 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-13 14:18:53I louved thees story, and I am reeley lougged een. SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential. And the paragraphs repeating is really annoyinganonymous readerReport 2012-02-08 17:01:57No, No, No, No, No, No!anonymous readerReport 2011-02-06 22:06:24The story itself was pretty good. I stopped right there and couldn’t keep reading. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it. Get yourself an editor.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-18 05:01:06I was enjoying it until it got to the part about her parents passing out.
