Needs proper grammar and fiction format, particularly dialogue. Porn ‘Corse’ should read ‘coarse’ and there were one or two others, but it’s still good. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-17 00:15:50Interesting twist to the story,cant wait to fead the 2nd installment.chocolat_eclairReport 2012-01-14 19:07:34Good story. Needs proper grammar and fiction format, particularly dialogue. ‘Corse’ should read ‘coarse’ and there were one or two others, but it’s still good. a note on marrines: most are more honerable than what alot of America thinks, mostley because of the media outlets doing antiwar crap(propaganda)… Don’t know what the bulk of America will think if they are shocked at soldiers pissing on dead bodies. …I’ve seen heads on stakes and genitals mutilated. . . . …and wasn’t Qaddafi’s dead body buggered ????«1» 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-17 00:15:50Interesting twist to the story,cant wait to fead the 2nd installment.chocolat_eclairReport 2012-01-14 19:07:34Good story. ‘Corse’ should read ‘coarse’ and there were one or two others, but it’s still good.
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