I can only hope that you wrote this at an earlier date and your understanding of the English language has improved remarkably between the two!Anonymous readerReport 2015-05-10 21:41:24You should proof read, or if you are then you should lean the language .Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-02 08:06:54A damn good stori. Porn What a turn on. Now get mom pregnant with the first of many kids, in future stories.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-27 11:32:56Good story. This was almost unreadable in fact I had to work so hard on chapter 2 that I finally gave up and began this comment. I can only hope that you wrote this at an earlier date and your understanding of the English language has improved remarkably between the two!Anonymous readerReport 2015-05-10 21:41:24You should proof read, or if you are then you should lean the language .Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-02 08:06:54A damn good stori.
